literature

It's Whatever Time

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Published: Dec 27, 2012

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I find you in bed, it's 6:00 a.m..

You wake up.

I feed you breakfast, it's 7:40 a.m..

You eat what you want.

I leave to go to school, it's 7:53 a.m..

You stay for a long time to wait.

I come back home, it's 2:30 p.m..

You have glee sparkling in your eyes.

I spend time with you, it's 5:00 p.m..

You wanna play with your toys.

I feed you again for dinner, it's 6:30 p.m..

You eat and wait for your pill.

I do my own stuff, it's 9:00 p.m..

You stay by me and rest for however long you want.

I go to bed, it's whatever time I want.

You go to bed and sleep for the night.

I find you in bed, it's 6:00 a.m..

We start this cycle all over again.

Hi everyone. Sorry I didn't post for a long while, school has been a major pain. But that's what I get for wanting to take an honors class. Anyways, I just thought of a poem, nothin' major, I just wanted to write something that I thought would be interesting, that's all. I was gonna end the poem differently, but decided that it would be too sad, so I'll post an alternative ending soon to get out the original idea. But for now, I hope you like my poem.

By the way, the poem is about my dog.

EDIT: Here's the link to the original piece for It's Whatever Time. Nothing major, just a bit different, but WAY sadder: [link]

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I love how this is about your dog